From 014e9fb700cac7173deab1cd671320bd737c12f6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chris Buechler <cmb@pfsense.org>
Date: Wed, 29 Oct 2014 01:29:59 -0500
Subject: Fix up text in pkg_config files

---
 pkg_config.8.xml | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'pkg_config.8.xml')

diff --git a/pkg_config.8.xml b/pkg_config.8.xml
index fd486696..41fa2680 100644
--- a/pkg_config.8.xml
+++ b/pkg_config.8.xml
@@ -127,8 +127,8 @@
 		<name>haproxy</name>
 		<pkginfolink>https://doc.pfsense.org/index.php/haproxy_package</pkginfolink>
 		<descr><![CDATA[The Reliable, High Performance TCP/HTTP Load Balancer<br />
-				This package implements both TCP and HTTP balance features from Haproxy.<br />
-				Supports acl's for smart backend switching.]]></descr>
+				This package implements the TCP and HTTP balancing features of haproxy.<br />
+				Supports ACLs for smart backend switching.]]></descr>
 		<website>http://haproxy.1wt.eu/</website>
 		<category>Services</category>
 		<version>1.4.24 pkg v 1.2.5</version>
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@
 		<name>haproxy-full</name>
 		<pkginfolink>https://doc.pfsense.org/index.php/haproxy_package</pkginfolink>
 		<descr><![CDATA[The Reliable, High Performance TCP/HTTP Load Balancer<br />
-				This package implements both TCP and HTTP balance features from Haproxy.<br />
+				This package implements the TCP and HTTP balancing features of haproxy.<br />
 				(Legacy version)]]></descr>
 		<website>http://haproxy.1wt.eu/</website>
 		<category>Services</category>
@@ -161,9 +161,9 @@
 	<package>
 		<name>haproxy-devel</name>
 		<pkginfolink>https://doc.pfsense.org/index.php/haproxy_package</pkginfolink>
-		<descr><![CDATA[The Reliable, High Performance TCP/HTTP(s) Load Balancer<br />
-				This package implements TCP, HTTP and HTTPS balance features from Haproxy.<br />
-				Supports acl's for smart backend switching.]]></descr>
+		<descr><![CDATA[The Reliable, High Performance TCP/HTTP(S) Load Balancer<br />
+				This package implements the TCP, HTTP and HTTPS balancing features of haproxy.<br />
+				Supports ACLs for smart backend switching.]]></descr>
 		<website>http://haproxy.1wt.eu/</website>
 		<category>Services</category>
 		<version>1.5.3 pkg v 0.12</version>
@@ -663,8 +663,8 @@
 	<package>
 		<name>Sarg</name>
 		<website>http://www.dansguardian.org/</website>
-		<descr><![CDATA[Sarg - Squid Analysis Report Generator is a tool that allow you to view "where" your users are going to on the Internet.<br />
-						Sarg provides many informations about Proxy(squid,squidguard or dansguardian) users activities: times, bytes, sites, etc...]]></descr>
+		<descr><![CDATA[Sarg - Squid Analysis Report Generator - is a tool that generates reports about where your users are going on the Internet.<br />
+						Sarg provides information about proxy users' activities: times, bytes, sites, etc. for those using Squid, Squidguard or dansguardian.]]></descr>
 		<category>Network Report</category>
 		<config_file>https://packages.pfsense.org/packages/config/sarg/sarg.xml</config_file>
 		<pkginfolink>https://forum.pfsense.org/index.php/topic,47765.0.html</pkginfolink>
@@ -703,7 +703,7 @@
 	<package>
 		<name>Varnish</name>
 		<descr><![CDATA[Varnish is a state-of-the-art, high-performance HTTP accelerator.<br />
-						It uses the advanced features in FreeBSD 6/7/8 to achieve its high performance.]]></descr>
+						It uses the advanced features in FreeBSD to achieve its high performance.]]></descr>
 		<website>http://varnish-cache.org</website>
 		<pkginfolink>https://doc.pfsense.org/index.php/Varnish_package</pkginfolink>
 		<category>Services</category>
@@ -1245,7 +1245,7 @@
 	</package>
 	<package>
 		<name>arpwatch</name>
-		<descr>Arpwatch monitors ethernet/ip address pairings. It also logs certain changes to syslog.</descr>
+		<descr>Arpwatch monitors Ethernet to IP address pairings. It logs certain changes to syslog.</descr>
 		<website>http://www-nrg.ee.lbl.gov/</website>
 		<category>Security</category>
 		<depends_on_package_base_url>https://files.pfsense.org/packages/8/All/</depends_on_package_base_url>
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